Roses Garden - Set Up/My Story
Sarah stared at her wall and blinked. A light flashed in her face, and a microphone lay on the edge of her bed. As Sarah lifted up to see what the time was she slowly saw the clock move to 2:00 A.M. There was sweat coming down her cheek she felt it hit her lip, the salty tear hit her tongue making her cringe from the sour taste.
I like this particular part of my story because I think that it was a descriptive, emotional, and fright feeling once you start to read. Most of my story has to be touched up very well! But I think that the beginning which is this paragraph will lead me to think brighter and better with ideas for my FINAL COPY!